[讨论]大家来讨论以下这段黑蔷薇保存会的介绍的英文翻译吧

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引用第1楼堀江家的奴隸于2007-08-31 23:58发表的  :
"Kurobara hozonkai" is a visual music group led and formed by Yui Horie, and it's came from the radio programme " Tenshi no Tamago" of Yui Horie. All the members of the are the staff of the radio programme.
The members of the band are Vocal "Yuieru" Yui Horie, Bass "Erueru", Guitar "OYKT", Chorus and (我不會) "Zemeeru", Angel Dance "Ma sama".
Since their first show up in C71, there were now 2CD "Tobenai no Tenshi" ( The angel that can't fly) and "Hanabi" ( Firework) and 1DVD "Blue Heaven" released.

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引用第2楼shanbentai于2007-08-31 23:59发表的  :

谢谢喵

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引用第3楼堀江家的奴隸于2007-09-01 00:01发表的  :

山貓先檢查一下啊XD

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引用第5楼堀江家的奴隸于2007-09-01 00:30发表的  :
released 是past participle, 形容詞
後面那句there were now two CDs and one DVD "BLUE HEAVEN" get released
會變成一句句字有兩個動詞( were 跟get)
那樣不就糟糕了嗎orz

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引用第7楼堀江家的奴隸于2007-09-01 00:41发表的  :
就直接把get刪去

接上released就可以了

2cds and 1 Dvd released. 文法絕不會有錯
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引用第10楼hornbird于2007-09-01 01:49发表的 :
我又來玩下
"Kurobara hozonkai" is a visual music group initiated by seiyuu (voice actor),  Yui Horie. The group was originated from the radio programme " Tenshi no Tamago" hosted by her. All members of the group are staff from that radio programme. Since debut in C71, they have released 2CD (Tobenai Tenshi and Hanabi)  and 1 DVD (Blue Heaven).
另外黑薔薇保存會叫Black-Rose-Preservation Association會不會好點？

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引用第9楼peace4ever于2007-09-01 01:13发表的 [讨论]大家来讨论以下这段黑蔷薇保存会的介绍的英文翻译吧 :
原来黑蔷薇保存会这样来...

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引用第17楼shanbentai于2007-09-01 11:44发表的  :
http://www.last.fm/music/%E9%BB%92%E8%96%94%E8%96%87%E4%BF%9D%E5%AD%98%E4%BC%9A/+wiki

来这儿看决定稿吧，谢谢各位喵

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引用第18楼Subi于2007-09-01 13:00发表的  :
亂翻譯的

Black Rose Preservation Association is a visual music band which is produced Yui Horie as a vocal actress. It was formed in a radio programme "Yui Hories' Angel Egg" . All members of group are the staff in this programme. They are Yuiel (Yui Horie) as a vocal; Elel as a bass; OYKT as a guitar; Zemeel as a chorus and word blame; Ma sama as a dancer. Since they formed this group, totally issued two singles ("A angel who can't fly" and "Firework") and one DVD single ("Blue Heaven").

For the further information, please refer to:
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引用第22楼earthfish于2007-09-01 22:47发表的  :

紅字是明顯的錯誤
第一個不知道想說什麼

第二個是中文式的英文
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引用第23楼Subi于2007-09-01 23:30发表的  :

produce意解創作、生產、製造
原來我打少一個by了
下面也漏了一個they.....
不好意思呢= =
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引用第24楼dljh于2007-09-01 23:35发表的  :

嘛……我说今天SUBI上班的时候老是切换画面，一开始我以为在她在看H……原来是在打英文翻译呀。



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引用第25楼Subi于2007-09-01 23:38发表的  :

我常常也要按ALT+TAB來快速的轉換畫面
不過被老闆看到我在玩MSN就不太好了